Dominic

"The Breaker of Spirits"

When Trauma Becomes a Weapon

He comes in out of the tunnel with soot on his face and a grin on it: "Worked like a charm, Meridia… The precious Zenithian Hall's probably still burnin' hotter than Solara's pyre as we speak." Dominic and Jay set the bombs that tore open Lucien's temple mid-sermon — the blast that, without either of them knowing it, gave Mira Roehart the chaos she needed to run. When he learns who the girl in white robes is, the grin goes out like a lamp.

"We can't trust her. We can't. She needs to be sent back out. Now… We don't owe her a godsdamn thing!" He loses the argument to Meridia's colder arithmetic, and hates that she is right. The next day he is back with a hooded Zenithian slung between him and Jay, wrenching the man's arms behind his back "quick and sure as a deckhand tying off a line. He had done this before."

What follows makes him the title of Chapter 24. When Meridia's reason fails against the captive's scripture, she nods, and Dominic steps into "the space she vacated with aggressive certainty" — first the soft voice, "Hey, friend," then the roar that brings the Forsaken to their feet, then the fists. He wants fear and repentance and gets a low, wet chuckle instead. He cannot stop. It is Mira's void that stops him.

Do you have ANY IDEA what it's like? To have your entire life—your family, your friends—ripped away like you never mattered?
— Dominic to the captured Zenithian (The Forsaken, Chapter 24)
Story in Progress
Only Chapters 23–24 of The Forsaken are public, and this profile stops there. Dominic has more to say to Mira in that book — where he came from, and how the world "got smaller" — and more to lose. Read on for the rest.

The Heart That Chose Violence Over Vulnerability

Dominic is not the sanctuary's suspicious old guard — that is Gerald, "grizzled" and spitting. Dominic is young, quick, and burning. His speech in the cavern is not an interrogation; it is a confession with a stranger's face for a target.

Burning Rage
"Paradise? This little slice of heaven Lucien's peddlin' is nothin' but a godsdamn lie!" A fist against the rock; dust falling; "Wake up!" His fury is "a wildfire catching dry grass" for the whole cavern (Ch. 24).
Mission First
"Her being here? It's a risk. A dangerous one. Our mission comes first." He argues with Meridia to her face and, losing, lets his fist sink and looks away (Ch. 23).
No Trust for White Robes
His gaze stops on the pristine white of Mira's robes, "so out of place here," and his shock at her name cools "into something harder" (Ch. 23).
Something Older Than Rage
"His voice cracked on something older, buried so deep it had rotted into him. 'How is that justice?'" And then the sob: "You forsake us. You forget we ever existed. And then you act like we should thank you!" (Ch. 24).
We can't trust her. We can't. She needs to be sent back out. Now. Her being here? It's a risk. A dangerous one. Our mission comes first.
— Dominic to Meridia (The Forsaken, Chapter 23)

Instruments of Rage and Protection

Dominic has no magic. He has bombs, rope, a knife on his belt, and a voice that turns a cavern of the cast-out into a mob.

Physical Presence
The Frame: Broad-shouldered; his shadow falls across the bound man "like a shroud" (Ch. 24)
The Fists: "A brutal right hook that connected with the captive's jaw in a sickening crunch" — and again, and harder
The Knife: He slashes the ropes lashing the captive to the chair "loose enough to lift, and no more than that"
Thrown Back: Mira's pulse of void hurls him backward "as if struck by an invisible fist"
Mission Capabilities
The Bombs: With Jay, sets the charges that blast fire and shrapnel from the side of the Zenithian Hall and shatter its stained-glass saints (Chosen Ch. 22; Forsaken Ch. 23)
The Capture: Leaves before false dawn and returns with a hooded Zenithian in torn white-and-gold (Ch. 24)
Deckhand's Knots: Wrenches the captive's arms behind him "quick and sure as a deckhand tying off a line" — an old skill from a life before
Escapes: "Runnin' for our lives," Jay says of their flight from the Chosen after the blast
Breaker of Spirits
The Soft Start: Crouched eye to eye — "Hey, friend… I didn't just risk my neck draggin' you all the way back here for you to go all ungrateful on me now."
The Roar: "He's disruptin' the godsdamn balance of this world, you blind fool!"
The Verdict: "Thank you for the privilege of losing everything."
The Failure: "He had wanted fear. Repentance. The sweet collapse of a Chosen brought low. And the bound man simply would not give it to him."
Voice of the Forsaken
Wolves in Sheep's Clothing: "You prey on the weak, the desperate—lost souls lookin' for a crumb of hope, for a sliver of belongin'."
Poof: "One wrong step, one whispered doubt, one godsdamn mistake… Poof. Gone. Just like that."
The Cavern Answers: "Tell 'em, Dominic!" "Enough is enough!" — "years of pain and rage given voice at last"
Cost: Mira, watching, sees "no justice left in this. Only cruelty: the very tyranny they despised, with the whip changing hands"

From Victim to Weapon of Resistance

Two chapters, one arc: triumph, suspicion, and a beating that shows Mira what the fight against Lucien can turn people into.

The Making of an Enforcer
Before
A life with family and a place in it, ended by Zenith's brand — the loss his whole speech is about. The particulars wait for a later chapter.
The Bombs (Chosen Ch. 22 / Forsaken Ch. 23)
Fire blooms from the side of the Zenithian Hall mid-sermon. Dominic and Jay run for the trees, thinking the mob is after them.
"Lucien Altheris' wife." (Ch. 23)
Triumph drains into disbelief, then into cold objection. Meridia overrules him: "She's our ace card." He looks away.
The Capture (Ch. 24)
Gone before dawn; back with a hooded Zenithian and Jay clearing a path through the crowd, "his jaw set, gaze cold, merciless."
The Nod (Ch. 24)
Meridia yields her place "to the breaker of spirits." Whisper, roar, fists — and the man's low chuckle that "undid Dominic entirely."
"STOP!" (Ch. 24)
Mira catches his wrist mid-swing with impossible strength; wings of void unfurl; he is thrown back. The captive looks up with the fog lifting.
The Price of Protection
Dominic says the truest thing anyone in the sanctuary says about the Forsaken — and says it with his hands around a bound man's throat. The book lets both stand. His grief is real, his analysis of Lucien is right, and the beating is still "the very tyranny they despised, with the whip changing hands." Mira's shout is a judgment on the room, and he is the one it lands on.
You tear apart families! You condemn us to die alone and afraid, cast out like vermin, like we ain't even human!
— Dominic to the captured Zenithian (The Forsaken, Chapter 24)

Bonds Forged in Fire and Blood

Dominic's people are the Forsaken; his partner is Jay; his commander is Meridia; and his newest problem wears white robes.

The Price of Righteous Fury

Dominic is the Forsaken's fire. He is the first face of the resistance Mira sees clearly — soot-streaked and grinning over a burning Hall — and the first she sees turn ugly, a day later, over a man tied to a chair. In between, he is the only person in the sanctuary who says out loud what most of them are thinking: that Lucien Altheris' wife is a danger, and that they owe her nothing.

His long speech in Chapter 24 is the closest thing the public chapters give to a creed for the Forsaken. Lucien "just wants you to worship him. Like he's Zenith himself." The Chosen are "wolves in sheep's clothin'" who promise home and family and take both away for a single whispered doubt. And then the line that names the chapter, torn out of him "thick with something ruined": Thank you for the privilege of losing everything.

The book does not let the speech excuse the fists. The captive will not break; the cheering curdles; Dominic keeps hitting; and it is Mira, of all people — the newcomer he wanted thrown back to the wolves — who steps between them and says the one word he cannot. He is thrown back by wings of void, and the sanctuary sees what she is.

Who Dominic was before the brand, and what the fight costs him after Chapter 24, are matters for the rest of The Forsaken. The public pages leave him where the void left him: on the stone, staring at a girl in white who has just done what he could not, and lifted a Zenithian's fog without a single blow.

Witness the Fury of the Forsaken

Meet Dominic coming out of the tunnel with soot on his face in Chapter 23 of The Forsaken — and hear the speech that names Chapter 24.